Issues : GE revisions

b. 87

composition: Op. 21, Concerto in F minor, Mvt I

No markings in A & GE2

Dot & slur in GE1 (→FEEE)

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In GE1 (→FEEE) the first group of quavers is provided with the same markings as the next: with a staccato dot on the 1st note and a slur. It is certainly a mistake: an error or rather an attempt of revision. The signs were removed in GE2, restoring the text of A, in which the markings appear in the figures spanning at least a tenth.

category imprint: Differences between sources

issues: Errors in GE , GE revisions

b. 87-88

composition: Op. 21, Concerto in F minor, Mvt I

Slurs from 2nd quaver in A & GE2

Slurs from 1st quaver in GE1 (→FEEE)

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The half-bar slurs of GE1 (→FEEE) are a typical example of schematic thinking of the engraver of GE1. Accurately marked slurs of A were restored in GE2. See also the note at the beginning of the bar.

category imprint: Differences between sources

issues: Inaccuracies in GE , GE revisions

b. 89

composition: Op. 21, Concerto in F minor, Mvt I

Quavers in A & GE2

Dotted rhythm in GE1 (→FEEE)

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In the main text we give the rhythm of A, not raising any source or musical doubts. The version of GE1 (→FEEE) is probably erroneous:

  • the layout of the text in GE1 practically excludes a possibility of performing rhythmical corrections at this place;
  • the authentic phrasing combines less naturally with a dotted rhythm on the 3rd beat (cf. phrasing and rhythm in the previous bar).

GE2 restored the version of A.

category imprint: Differences between sources

issues: Annotations in teaching copies , Annotations in FED , Errors in GE , GE revisions , Dotted or even rhythm

b. 90

composition: Op. 21, Concerto in F minor, Mvt I

3 staccato dots in A & FE (→EE)

No marks in GE1

2 dots in GE2

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The sophisticated articulation marking – legato in the top voice of the octaves and staccato in the bottom one – was only partially reproduced in GE1. In the proofreading of FE (→EE), Chopin restored staccato in the bottom voice. Two out of three dots were added also in GE2.

category imprint: Differences between sources

issues: Errors in GE , GE revisions , Authentic corrections of FE

b. 93

composition: Op. 21, Concerto in F minor, Mvt I

Slurs separated over rest in A & GE2

Slurs separated over bar line in GE1 (→FEEE)

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Same as in analogous bar 85, leading the slur to the end of bar 93 is a characteristic inaccuracy of GE1, which, in this case, included also the beginning of the next bar. Inconsistency with A is even more striking, since Chopin modified both slurs in the manuscript and the result of the corrections does not raise any doubt.

category imprint: Differences between sources; Corrections & alterations; Source & stylistic information

issues: Inaccuracies in GE , Corrections in A , GE revisions