b. 58
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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In A1 both indications – and velociss. – are written close to the middle of the 2nd half of the bar, which certainly does not directly translate into the performance in this context – neither nor velociss. can start to be valid only just in the second quarter of the run, where they are placed. Therefore, it is a striking example of indications placed near the middle of their scope; therefore, in the substantive transcription of A1 we move them to the beginning of the run. The fact that sempre più piano was placed in CJ and CK under the bottom stave probably corresponds to the notation of [A2]; however, it could have been forced by the lack of space between the staves. According to us, this indication applies not only to the L.H. part, but to the entire musical course in a longer perspective than the hairpins, which concern the run only – cf. the indications in the next bars: delicato, delicatissimo, and . The changes and additions performed to the indication in CB and EL cannot be authentic. category imprint: Interpretations within context; Differences between sources; Corrections & alterations issues: Centrally placed marks , Balakirev's revisions , Revisions in EL |
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b. 58
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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The mark visible in A1 over the 2nd and 3rd quavers in the 2nd half of the bar is probably a slur. At the same time, it seems likely that, taking into account the partially draft nature of A1, it is supposed to mark a half-bar slur, which would be natural in this context (cf. b. 22). This figure, just like all the similar ones, is encompassed with a half-bar slur also in CB. In the main text we do not give this slur, omitted by Chopin in [A2] (→CJ,CK). category imprint: Graphic ambiguousness; Differences between sources issues: Inaccurate slurs in A |
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b. 58
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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The 6th L.H. quaver in EL is an a instead of f, which must be a mistake. See the note at the beginning of the bar. category imprint: Differences between sources issues: Terzverschreibung error |
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b. 58
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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The dynamic hairpins in the copies based directly on [A2] quite significantly differ in their range, although both in CJ and CK the marks are placed more or less symmetrically with respect to the centre of the run. Therefore, one may assume that the situation in [A2] was similar, which points to a more careful notation than in A1. In the main text we reproduce the notation of CK, which does not raise any stylistic doubts, and which probably reproduced the notation of [A2] more faithfully than CJ. The hairpins in EL, adjusted to the semiquaver beaming and maximally extended, must be a result of an editorial revision. category imprint: Graphic ambiguousness; Differences between sources issues: Scope of dynamic hairpins , Inaccuracies in JC , Revisions in EL |
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b. 59-60
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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Since both CJ and CK are based on [A2], their differing versions cannot be true at the same time. However, there are no grounds to consider one of them to be more likely than the other. According to us, it is also likely that according to Chopin's intention, it was both minims that were supposed to be accented – it could have been Chopin himself that overlooked it in [A2] or both copyists at the same time. This version was implemented in CB, and we suggest it in the main text. As an alternative solution we suggest two long accents, whose application in this context – long notes – is closer to the Chopinesque practices concerning the choice of accents. category imprint: Differences between sources; Editorial revisions issues: Long accents , Errors of JC , Balakirev's revisions , Errors in CK |