Issues : Kolberg's revisions
b. 8
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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The concordant text of A1 and CJ leaves no doubts that it was also [A2] that featured f here. Therefore, the d note present in CK (→CB) and EL is a result of an arbitrary decision and most likely Kolberg's mistake, doubled by the use of abridged notation and reproduced by further copying. category imprint: Differences between sources issues: Terzverschreibung error , Kolberg's revisions |
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b. 11
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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Separating the tenor voice must have been an arbitrary decision introduced in EL. According to us, it is likely that the author thereof was Kolberg, who added similar short motifs in the middle section of the Lento (b. 35-36 and 39-40). category imprint: Differences between sources issues: Kolberg's revisions , Revisions in EL |
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b. 13
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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The arguments for adopting the version of CJ as the principal one are as follows:
The version of the remaining sources can be considered an equal variant, particularly since it cannot be ruled out that in spite of the awkward layout, it was Kolberg that faithfully copied [A2] and Ludwika that committed a mistake. category imprint: Differences between sources; Corrections & alterations issues: Main-line changes , Errors of JC , Kolberg's revisions , Balakirev's revisions |
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b. 16
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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Just like in the case of other interventions concerning the pitch/rhythm, the arbitrary change of the rhythm of this bar was most probably performed by Oskar Kolberg. category imprint: Differences between sources issues: Kolberg's revisions |
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b. 26
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composition: WN 37, Lento con gran espressione
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The initial version of A1 was corrected still in this autograph (inaccurately – the penultimate L.H. quaver, b, remained unchanged), whereas the sources based on [A2] already contain the changed version (regardless of the rhythmic changes). The version of EL may be Kolberg's revision after the analogy with b. 22. category imprint: Differences between sources; Corrections & alterations; Source & stylistic information issues: Errors resulting from corrections , Errors of A , Corrections of AI , Kolberg's revisions , Revisions in EL |